In an unknown land

disillusioned1

 

 

In an unknown land

I ,a stranger

Walked in

Eager

 

In an unknown land

I, a stranger

Believed

Cherished

 

In an unknown land

I, a stranger

Beguiled

Disillusioned

 

In an unknown land

I, a traveler

You, a passerby

Wiser

 

 

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20 Comments

  1. Very contemplative. I can see a definite shift towards an exploration of your inner self. Well written and the short format gives it all the more incisiveness to the poem. Wishing you progress in your explorations.

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    1. Thank you so much. When I re-look at the poem thinking of the inner self as ‘the unknown land,’ it transforms into a deeper meaning. This is when the reader provides another dimension and thereby adds more value to a writer’s words. Thank you!

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  2. Nice to have you back, Madam with a refreshing new poem..!! Quite well explained the perplexity of a traveler delving into uncharted waters. Relatable as well. Well written, as usual, Madam.. 😊

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          1. And yet, you broke it open, which is what matters. Cages can be golden, but that doesn’t make it less of a cage.
            I should say you are the one who is teaching here and inspiring us to break open our cocoons or cages or boundaries. Thank you Madam for sharing..!! πŸ™‚
            by the way, I am awaiting your feedback on a recent post of mine, dealing with similar theme.. fingers crossed..

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          2. Thanks Abirbhav for leading me to the post. Managed to read 2 wonderful posts written by you today and must say, I do not regret it in the least. Keep inspiring and educatingπŸ™‚

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          3. Well, I don’t think I am qualified enough to “educate” you or anyone else. I just try to put forth my observations.
            Thank you immensely Madam for taking the time to read my posts. I am so happy that you could enjoy reading them.. Look forward to more such discussions with you and learn more from them.. 😊😊

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